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Hello, please could you correct my mistakes in the text ? Thank you in advance. (I am french)

I have an error message so the text is attached

Hello please could you correct my mistakes in the text Thank you in advance I am french I have an error message so the text is attached class=

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jennygoodwell123

Answer:

Looks good to me, not great at english in general but as an English person I can easily understand what your trying to say

Answer:  There were only a couple of mistakes.  For some reason, Brainly thinks there're offensive words in the text, so I attached pictures of the corrections and explanations.

Explanation:

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