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Read this example of incorrect sentence structure.

Paula is moving to Chicago, winters are cold there.

Which revision best corrects the sentence?

Paula is moving to Chicago winters are cold there.
Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold.
Paula is moving to Chicago, so winters are cold there.
Paula is moving to Chicago; however, winters are cold there.

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Answer:

The correct answer would be Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold.

Explanation:

ProfChris1

To revise the incorrect sentence, the best revision that corrects it is: Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold.

What is revision?

Revision is known to be the process by which something is changed in order to make it better or improve on it. Revision is done in writing in other to make it more understandable.

We can see that the correct revision is "Paula is moving to Chicago, where winters are cold."

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